Hi all,
I'm writing my first novel. My first MC has just been hit on the head (temple) with a rolling-pin by the wife of the man she has run away with, who has been stalking her (my MC is more sympathetic than she sounds, and the wife, considerably less-so). I like the rolling-pin detail, because the stalker considers herself to be the Queen of all domestic matters.
I have three questions about the rolling-pin:
1. Most importantly - would my first MC survive? - I want her to, but it has to be realistic. If she wouldn't survive a blow with a rolling-pin to the temple, can you suggest either: a domestic object that would have a less damaging impact (while still knocking her out cold) or a better place for the stalking-wife to hit her.
2. How would she feel and what would she experience when she came around.
3. Is a rolling-pin too much of a cliché?
I'd really appreciate your advice.
Thanking you in advance.
MC hit on head with rolling pins. Questions.
I'm writing my first novel. My first MC has just been hit on the head (temple) with a rolling-pin by the wife of the man she has run away with, who has been stalking her (my MC is more sympathetic than she sounds, and the wife, considerably less-so). I like the rolling-pin detail, because the stalker considers herself to be the Queen of all domestic matters.
I have three questions about the rolling-pin:
1. Most importantly - would my first MC survive? - I want her to, but it has to be realistic. If she wouldn't survive a blow with a rolling-pin to the temple, can you suggest either: a domestic object that would have a less damaging impact (while still knocking her out cold) or a better place for the stalking-wife to hit her.
2. How would she feel and what would she experience when she came around.
3. Is a rolling-pin too much of a cliché?
I'd really appreciate your advice.
Thanking you in advance.
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