It's that time again! I'm looking for betas. I don't mind if you read just ten chapters or the whole book. Up to you. My book is 120k. I'm willing to critique your work in exchange when you're done.
Please respond with how much you'd like to critique and your experience as a beta. Thanks!
Here's a quick summary:
Vale cures magical poisons and battles monsters with one goal in her mind -- save her family’s village. Its protective enchantment weakens against the surrounding land’s toxic magic, which creeps in, withering crops and creating monsters that slaughter livestock and wreak chaos.
Seeking a magic to strengthen the enchantment, she journeys beyond civilization, to a dusty White Tower. Once inside, her magic stops working. Gone is her intense speed and agility, her use of teleporting doors, her elemental spells. That’s when a mysterious swordsman named Kellis attacks.
Broken and bloody, Vale barely escapes. Once away from the Tower and clean of its magic-stifling dust, her magic returns. As her injuries heal, she’s torn between protecting her village and a new threat -- old enemies armed with the dust, supplied by Kellis. Turns out he’s vowed revenge on magedom for destroying his homeland and is using others to do his dirty work.
While Vale’s distracted from her village, the enchantment weakens more than ever. But she can’t protect her people without stopping Kellis and the dust first. She learns a powerful new spell with the intent of destroying the Tower. But she’d better beware, because Kellis's there too, waiting to kill the Mage that got away.
Betas for the Mage of the Mist
Please respond with how much you'd like to critique and your experience as a beta. Thanks!
Here's a quick summary:
Vale cures magical poisons and battles monsters with one goal in her mind -- save her family’s village. Its protective enchantment weakens against the surrounding land’s toxic magic, which creeps in, withering crops and creating monsters that slaughter livestock and wreak chaos.
Seeking a magic to strengthen the enchantment, she journeys beyond civilization, to a dusty White Tower. Once inside, her magic stops working. Gone is her intense speed and agility, her use of teleporting doors, her elemental spells. That’s when a mysterious swordsman named Kellis attacks.
Broken and bloody, Vale barely escapes. Once away from the Tower and clean of its magic-stifling dust, her magic returns. As her injuries heal, she’s torn between protecting her village and a new threat -- old enemies armed with the dust, supplied by Kellis. Turns out he’s vowed revenge on magedom for destroying his homeland and is using others to do his dirty work.
While Vale’s distracted from her village, the enchantment weakens more than ever. But she can’t protect her people without stopping Kellis and the dust first. She learns a powerful new spell with the intent of destroying the Tower. But she’d better beware, because Kellis's there too, waiting to kill the Mage that got away.
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