Hey guys. I'm really stuck here. I keep writing and rewriting this sentence and I can't figure how to get my point across without it feeling really wordy. I'm trying to introduce my MC, an unassuming guy with a very powerful-sounding name. Help?
"Named after a Norse god and a Supreme Court Justice, Thorgood’s hefty name has always belied an even heftier complacency."
Help with an annoying sentence
"Named after a Norse god and a Supreme Court Justice, Thorgood’s hefty name has always belied an even heftier complacency."
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