I didn’t have any idea where I was when I woke up. All I knew is that I was shivering as chilly gusts of wind battered off of my scantily clad body. A Sharp pain surged through my legs as I struggled to pull myself up from the cold, wet ground. I was surrounded by darkness. Not even the moon could offer me enough light to figure out where the hell I was! It was almost as if I was blind.
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So, what do you think? Did it catch your attention or not? Does it make you want to read on. Thanks in advance.
Is the opening paragraph of my novel boring? (Very short)
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So, what do you think? Did it catch your attention or not? Does it make you want to read on. Thanks in advance.
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