Hello, All!
I'm seeking betas (all levels of experience appreciated/accepted) for my MS. Logline below:
In a corrupted cloud forest, a 16-year-old Ranger seeks a rare oil worthy of his Trial offering when he stumbles upon a group devoted to the Lost Ones, who bear life-changing information that could secure a prestigious ranking amongst his tribesmen once delivered.
I'd like to send a chapter or two before committing to a full critique just to make sure it's something you're into. Don't really need line-by-line edits, more interested in overall character and plot development. Harsh criticism is fine - I want to know what isn't working so I can fix it!
Please DM me if interested and I'll send a partial.
Thank you for your interest!
BrandiZ
Seeking Betas for 75k YA High Fantasy
I'm seeking betas (all levels of experience appreciated/accepted) for my MS. Logline below:
In a corrupted cloud forest, a 16-year-old Ranger seeks a rare oil worthy of his Trial offering when he stumbles upon a group devoted to the Lost Ones, who bear life-changing information that could secure a prestigious ranking amongst his tribesmen once delivered.
I'd like to send a chapter or two before committing to a full critique just to make sure it's something you're into. Don't really need line-by-line edits, more interested in overall character and plot development. Harsh criticism is fine - I want to know what isn't working so I can fix it!
Please DM me if interested and I'll send a partial.
Thank you for your interest!
BrandiZ
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