I'm trying to do a sentence. The FIRST sentence of the chapter, but I'm having issues on how to word it and where the punctuation's go.
"Christa, a woman in her mid-thirties, tall and dangerous looking but soft-spoken and gentle as a kitten, walked through the back streets of Ergastulum."
See, I'm not sure if i have too many commas. help?
I have a grammar issue
"Christa, a woman in her mid-thirties, tall and dangerous looking but soft-spoken and gentle as a kitten, walked through the back streets of Ergastulum."
See, I'm not sure if i have too many commas. help?
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