A dumb question for writers of "historical fiction"

lundi 31 août 2015

What exactly, in today's publishing environment, constitutes "historical fiction"? I'm finishing a novel set around 1850 in frontier America, but I never considered it to fit into the "historical fiction" category, and I'm not at all sure I could query it using that term. But maybe i'm misconstruing what the term now means. I just don't know. Surely it's more than just a matter of historical setting. But maybe i'm wrong about that, too. Your views?

caw
A dumb question for writers of "historical fiction"

SepNoWriMo 2015!

With a new month nearly upon us, it's time for a new monthly goals thread!

As I mentioned in the August thread, I'm going to ditch the word-counting. Instead, I'll aim to complete sections of my book instead. The beginning of September is going to be fairly quiet for me, but then it's going to pick up abruptly on the 15th when I start rehearsing my next production. I'll have to get as much accomplished in the first two weeks of September as possible.

So here are my goals:

1) Write up to the big climax of current WIP (Book 3 in my fantasy series)
2) Revise manuscript of Book #2 in series (I swear I'm going to get this done - it's been on my To-Do list way too long)
3) Read 3 books
4) Write 1 blog post
5) Read remaining two plays on my list

What about you guys?
SepNoWriMo 2015!

VERY IMPORTANT DISCOVERY: Lava Cake @ home

This summer we were at the lake with my grandparents and aunt and uncle and cousin, and we rotated being responsible for dinner. TOTALLY ON ACCIDENT we discovered how to make lava cake, or molten chocolate cake, or whatever you call it. Well, we made something that tastes pretty much like it but that can be made at home for many people.

Step One: Get a Ghirardelli Chocolate Supreme Brownie Mix. Make it according to the directions. IT MUST BE CHOCOLATE SUPREME AND YOU MUST USE THE CHOCOLATE SYRUP POUCH OR THE "CAKE" WILL NOT BE OOEY-GOOEY MOIST LIKE A LAVA CAKE.

Step Two: Serve the brownies.

Step Three: Top with vanilla ice cream and hot fudge (ALSO IMPORTANT, NOT CHOCOLATE SYRUP).

Step Four: Eat it with a spoon. It tastes pretty much bang-on for lava cake.
VERY IMPORTANT DISCOVERY: Lava Cake @ home

Is it hard to find an audience for a story about an elderly person?

Hi everyone,

I'm trying to write an adventure story where the protagonist is a 75-year-old woman. However, I'm a little worried about the audience. It's adult fiction, but I feel like it's a little unusual for the protagonist to be this old. Do you have any advice on writing about elderly characters?

Thanks.
Is it hard to find an audience for a story about an elderly person?

FINDERS KEEPERS, MG fantasy released 8/29/15

My MG fantasy is out from a small press.

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Yes, Stephen King stole my title! The paperback released on Saturday and the e-book is available on Sept 12. Here's the blurb:

The eight gods that govern the world are tricky and fickle, and even the most innocuous of their blessings comes with consequences. Those who find a blessing are cursed to dance on strings in exchange for good fortune. Which begs the question: is finding one good fortune at all?

Cade lives a simple life with his mother and brother, but when he finds a heart stone, he wonders if he can’t change that. Heart stones are said to bring luck to those who hold them, and Cade’s tiny family could surely do with good fortune.

But heart stones aren’t just tokens of good luck; simply tracking one down is a sign of a special gift. Cade is a Finder, just like his mother before him, but this gift is hardly what is seems; if the larger community finds out about this, Cade’s entire life will change.

And not for the better.

Now he lives outside the law, fending off a new hardship that he never anticipated: an overwhelming desire to take back what is his.

No matter the cost.

I didn't write that, but I like it. It's dramatic.

Now I'll go back to my cave.
FINDERS KEEPERS, MG fantasy released 8/29/15

Edward Necarsulmer IV

Dear All,

Do you have any experience with Edward Necarsulmer IV? He joined Dunow, Carlson & Lerner.

Thanks a lot.

Lora Davidoff
Edward Necarsulmer IV

A whole new meaning to catfishing

A whole new meaning to catfishing

Rules for Writing a Novel

If you don't follow a guideline, such as plot development (for example, the plot is vengeance), how do you create story development?
Rules for Writing a Novel

Really? You Named Your Child What?

In 2011, a man in Egypt named his newborn daughter "Facebook"
Really? You Named Your Child What?

scrivener - moved on?

Has anyone who used scrivener on a regular basis moved on to a different software package and if so, why?
scrivener - moved on?

Paragraph help and advice

I wasn't sure whether to put this thread here or in the critique forum, so please move if I am incorrect.

I have a paragraph I typed up for the beginning of a story, and I'd really like some word and sentence structure advice on it from people more skilled then I am. The sentence is below (from Jessica's POV). Looking for some advice on how to improve this, and maybe point out some ways to make it better.

The paragraph is below...


"Jessica aimlessly stared out the passenger window of the solar, wanting nothing more than this abysmal trip to be over. She never cared much for carriage rides, or the final destinations that they normally entail. Across from her, Elissa sat, with her legs crossed and as usual, hands folded in her lap. Next to her a young, wide eyed soldier sat at guard, facing the prisoner that was directly to Jessica's right. Jessica glanced at the soldier and smiled, in a feeble attempt to calm his nerves. She had no idea what his name was, nor did she really care to learn it."


This is the first time I've ever shared *anything* I've written before, so please be kind :). It's a 1st draft kind of writing (I did not go back and edit it since typing the first time), so hopefully I didn't do TOO bad lol.

Anyways, tell me what you think and how I can improve the structure, what I could possibly add, etc.

Thanks!
Paragraph help and advice

Post a free book on Amazon?

I tried to post a series of free short-stories for a promotion platform. I can't find how to put up a free book. Each time I try, it tells me I can only choose $.99 cents as the lowest amount. BUT, I see free books often - any clue? Thanks

BTW: I'm not very tech-smart, so need a non-tech answer. thx
Post a free book on Amazon?

when submitting, what to do with lack of chapters

So my book doesn't have chapters. It's divided instead by messages ( a la Perks of being a wallflower) When an agent requests your work (let's say synopsis and the first 5 chapters) what should I do? Is there a standard page number that usually is in place of a chapter? So the first 50 pages instead of 5 chapters? My messages are too short to be considered chapter length (about 1-3 pages). I was thinking I would just send the first 30 pages or so and in my email to the agent state something like "as my manuscript is not divided into chapters, please consider the attached first 30 pages." Would this suffice?
when submitting, what to do with lack of chapters

How to handle tweaking your book?

I've got two books out in my series and I'm preparing to publish the third next month. One thing I've noticed, though, is that over the course of going through editing for the three, I'm much more keyed in to small issues I want to change in the first book. Nothing egregious, but just little things (like a few too many "was" verbs) that it would make me feel better if I tuned them up.

How do I handle that? Do I fix it, re-upload, and call it a new edition? Can I do something with Amazon to make sure that buyers get the updated copy automatically? Should I even do it? The books are selling well--should it maybe just be a case of "live, learn, and do better in the subsequent books?" Maybe I'm just too sensitive to them--now that I'm looking for them, I spot them everywhere, including in trade-published books.

What do folks think? Has anyone done this, or decided just to leave well enough alone?
How to handle tweaking your book?

What words trip up your fingers?

There are words I perpetually typo. Like kidnapping, which my fingers like changing to kindapping. Thomas becomes Thoams (I did that just by typing the name as fast as I could). I can't be alone in this. So what words trip up your fingers? What are the words that you misspell so consistently you've taught autocorrect to fix them for you?
What words trip up your fingers?

Video Game Hobbyist Game Development

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Video Game Hobbyist Game Development

Finding an exciting beginning

So this is more of a question than anything else. I'm working on the umpteenth edit of my first book and the one thing I keep noticing (as others do, too) is that my beginning is very slow and boring. I created a new intro that ties to the end, but I kind of hate it. Does anyone have any tips on how to create an interesting, exciting opening that ties to the end? I need something to hook readers into from the start and I just can't figure it out.
Finding an exciting beginning

Endorsed by Douglas Preston!

"Primordial by Toby Tate is an exceptionally well-crafted sci-fi supernatural thriller!" --Douglas Preston, #1 bestselling author of BLASPHEMY and IMPACT




Now up for pre-order on Amazon! http://ift.tt/1LFG8JH
Endorsed by Douglas Preston!

Querying agents who read full MS last time around

Hello!

I recently parted ways with my agent and am starting to query a new project. I'd like to query some of the agents who read the full for my last project. My querying experience last time happened way too quickly. I got an offer within a week, and had five offers by the next week. At the time I was thrilled (and you're probably thinking, "oh, shut up"), but I did not query intelligently. I was so new to the publishing world I had no idea who to choose, and I hadn't even queried a few of my top-choice agents yet. By the time I had offers, other agents rushed to read and stepped aside after reading the full with SUCH kind words, things like they were sure it was going to sell, or they couldn't wait to see my book on the shelves, or they loved the book but it's just not right for their list at this time.

Unfortunately, I made a bad decision, and either because of this or not, my book didn't sell (which as you can imagine, after this initial rush of enthusiasm, was pretty devastating).

Now that I'm more well-versed in literary circles and I know who I want to land as my agent, I know that some of these passing agents are my top choices. So my question is: when I query this time around with my shiny new manuscript, should I bring up my last book in the query? Should I remind them of their kind words from last time around? Or should I even reply to their final email from last year with an update that I have a new project I'm querying? The thing is, I also believe that my last project could sell if I had the right agent. And if they already loved that book, maybe they could take it on now after all. Obviously I want to focus on this new project, but I thought if they already liked my writing style, it could help to bring it up. What do you think?

Thanks in advance! :-)
Querying agents who read full MS last time around

Free Writing - Can a Writer Do Without?

dimanche 30 août 2015

First off, I'm actually a non-fiction writer (journalist, PR & advertising copywriter) and translator, so I am used to having a very specific topic (and goal) in mind, when I set out to write. Having been a full-time writer for 20 years, I think I am doing okay with non-fictional writing. I've also ghost-written two non-fiction books and I have an agent currently trying to find publishers interested in a total of four NF book proposals that would all be under my name. (All of this in my home country and in my native language, not English.)

Recently, I have started taking some classes geared towards creative (fictional) writing, as I intend to work on several stories (memoir, travelogue) that I believe to benefit from creative writing techniques. A staple in all of these creative writing classes seems to be "free writing," sometimes aided by a prompt, sometimes just framed by a time limitation ("write whatever comes to your mind for 10 minutes straight, don't think, don't look up, don't lift your pen off the page") - and I can't even begin to express how annoyed I am every time "free writing" is demanded (which is something that's non coming up in the type of writing I've been doing for a living. It seems to be very specific to creative writing - or maybe it is specific to this culture? I am now living in the United States, so it might be a cultural thing?). And in seemingly every class I am being reminded that free writing is essential to (good) creative writing and that everyone should do at least 15 minutes of free writing every single day. *eek*
At this point I outright hate free writing. I don't want to do any free writing. I don't want to dabble without thinking. I like to think. I like to think a lot. I like to think first, do some research, think some more, then maybe do some writing. Free writing feels almost insulting to my inner thinker.

So my question is:
Are there any writers out there, who do not engage in free writing and who - like yours truly - simply don't see the benefits (because, as we all know, not everyone is created equal and not everything works the same way for everyone)?
And if you don't do any free writing, do you feel that forgoing the free writing mantra has hindered your writing in any way? Or has not doing any free writing possibly done the opposite and propelled your writing to new heights?

Please share your opinions and experiences! :-)
Free Writing - Can a Writer Do Without?

Hey, Hi, Hello

New here and wanted to drop in to say hello! The name's Amanda and it's good to meet you.:)
Hey, Hi, Hello

What can you do with a short(ish) play?

I just finished a play that came out to be just over 30 pages double spaced. It has about a dozen short scenes. And, I should mention, this is a stage play and a little avant-grade. It is a dream of mine to watch a play I wrote preformed, but I think I have created something with an awkward length. That being said, I think this is some of my best writing. I don't want to give up on it. Because of the length, should I try to add more scenes? Or what can I do with a play this length?
What can you do with a short(ish) play?

R.I.P. Oliver Sacks

Ii haven 't seen that anyone else has posted it here, but famed neuropsychologist and best-selling author Oliver Sacks has died, age 82. I didn't bother with a link, as the story is widely available on-line. Late in life he began to write informal popular non-fiction about his specialty, and immediately demonstrated a wonderful facility at doing so. His first big seller, I believe, was Awakenings, which was made into an excellent movie starring Robert DeNiro. Sacks was always a little bothered by having the recognition as a best-selling author, but i heard an interview with him a few years ago, and he was affable, informative and seemed comfortable in what he had achieved. He should have been. If you haven't read any of his work (also The Man Who Mistook His Wife for a Hat and The Island of the Color-Blind, among others), you've missed something.

caw
R.I.P. Oliver Sacks

Querying to publishers for children's books vs on-demand print

Can anyone give me any advice on querying to agents or publishing houses for children's books? Obviously, there is a lot of research into it, but I'm wondering if anyone with an agent can give me some advice on making my product more appealing.

Has anyone on here had success with using an on demand print service such as lulu for children's books? Or their professional services.

I know that these are two very different things and processes, but I am currently researching more opportunities.

Thanks
Querying to publishers for children's books vs on-demand print

Wes Craven passes at 76

So, this just passed through my Facebook.

Wes Craven, Horror Maestro, Dies at 76

Quote:

Wes Craven, the famed writer-director known for the Nightmare on Elm Street and Scream movies, died Sunday after a battle with brain cancer. He was 76.


Craven, whose iconic Freddy Krueger character horrified viewers, died at his home in Los Angeles, his family announced.
Well, that pretty much puts a damper on the weekend. Rest in peace Master Craven.
Wes Craven passes at 76

Female equivalent of "man up"?

So my current MC is a tomboy who regards emotions as a sign of weakness even when they concern her possibly-terminal mother. She tells herself to... well, something resembling "man up" or "sac up". At the moment, I've got "grow a pair" (lots of things in AFAB people come in pairs, right? Breasts, ovaries, fallopian tubes...) but I don't think that's the best phrase. I just can't think of a better one (and am not entirely sure there is a better one, but it can't hurt to ask, right?).
Female equivalent of "man up"?

Do I need to give every detail or is it okay that it's implied?

My manuscript is in first person split between MMC and FMC. My MMC discovers something that means the plan that they had made for the big final scene needs to change. I haven't said or shown anything in my manuscript so that the reader knows that FMC knows of the new discovery, but because she is integral to the new plan, I'd thought that it was implied that the new discovery had been conveyed to her (off camera). One of my betas has asked if she has been told, so I guess to her, it's not clear. There is a place where I can add this detail but I'm hesitant because to me it seems obvious that she must have been told as the plan can't go ahead without her. Just wondering what others feelings are on this in ya? Do I need to specifically include a part where MMC tells FMC the new plan or not?
Do I need to give every detail or is it okay that it's implied?

Thematic prize cryptic crossword in the NADFAS Review

Pleased to announce I set the prize puzzle in the autumn edition of The National Association of Decorative & Fine Arts Society Review.

The magazine has pedigree for cryptics as, for the last few years, the prize puzzle has been set almost exclusively by setters from The Times and is currently edited by Dean Mayer (Independent, Financial Times, Daily Telegraph, Times and Sunday Times setter).

The magazine containing the puzzle is available in e-format at the following link:

http://ift.tt/1Q2mhWE

However, if you dig lovely art, craft and design-type stuff (and crosswords!), very reasonable subscriptions to the hard copy magazine (for those in the UK at least) are also available.

As always, I offer many thanks to AW for allowing me to run crosswords here and also to those who played them - all invaluable stuff in learning how to set for solvers and much appreciated. :)
Thematic prize cryptic crossword in the NADFAS Review

You Can No Longer Climb Mt. McKinley...

... because it's now Denali. Or at least it will be, soon.

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Quote:

The Obama administration will change the name of North America's tallest mountain peak from Mount McKinley to Denali, the White House said Sunday, a major symbolic gesture to Alaska Natives on the eve of President Barack Obama's historic visit to Alaska.




By renaming the peak Denali, an Athabascan word meaning "the high one," Obama waded into a sensitive and decades-old conflict between residents of Alaska and Ohio. Alaskans have informally called the mountain Denali for years, but the federal government recognizes its name invoking the 25th president, William McKinley, who was born in Ohio and assassinated early in his second term.


"With our own sense of reverence for this place, we are officially renaming the mountain Denali in recognition of the traditions of Alaska Natives and the strong support of the people of Alaska," said Interior Secretary Sally Jewell.

This part of the article is particularly telling:

Quote:

The president was also expected to announce new steps to help Alaska Native communities on Wednesday when he becomes the first sitting president to visit the Alaska Arctic.
Alaska's been a state since 1959. Is Sarah Palin seriously the highest ranking person to visit the area? Let that sink in.
You Can No Longer Climb Mt. McKinley...

Chrissie Hynde of the Pretenders: "Rape victims should take responsibility"

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She blames herself for an assault that happened when she was 21 but is apparently shaming all victims:

Quote:

Hynde said that if she now were to be "walking around in my underwear, and I'm drunk" prior to a sexual assault, she would be at fault. "Who else's fault can it be?" she said. "If I'm walking around, and I'm very modestly dressed and I'm keeping to myself, and someone attacks me, then I'd say that's his fault. But if I'm being very lairy and putting it about and being provocative, then you are enticing someone who's already unhinged -- don't do that. Come on! That's just common sense."

"You know, if you don't want to entice a rapist, don't wear high heels so you can't run from him," said the singer behind such hits as "I'll Stand By You." She continued: "If you're wearing something that says 'Come and f--- me,' you'd better be good on your feet. ... I don't think I'm saying anything controversial, am I?"
Just lost a metric shit tonne of respect for her.
Chrissie Hynde of the Pretenders: "Rape victims should take responsibility"

Extension for productivity for Chrome?

I know there's some kind of app or extension that will let you limit the time you spend on certain sites (*cough*AW*cough*) so that you're forced to do more things you're supposed to (*cough*actuallywrite*cough*). I... have zero attention span and need this extension but can't find it in the Chrome store. I was sure they made it for Chrome. Anyone know what I'm talking about?
Extension for productivity for Chrome?

freelance copyediting

I hope this fits this forum. I looked into freelance copyediting last night and was recommended taking online classes. Do you know of any through (an) org/school(s) more well-known and widely-accepted than others?
freelance copyediting

It's official: The Republican Party has gone batshit insane

Scott Walker wants to discuss putting a wall along the Canadian border:

http://ift.tt/1O2lIuK

caw
It's official: The Republican Party has gone batshit insane

80s or 90s Slang

Which decade has the better slang, 80s or 90s?

Does this thread make you want to say Barf Me Out! (80s) or make you want say As If! (90s)
80s or 90s Slang

Computer Code and Journalism Skills

My goal is to complete a website that focuses on creating Website Proposals, Website Content, Print Journalism, and Resumes and Cover Letters. The objective is to build a website from the ground up.

To achieve this goal, I've taken college classes that teach the student how to write code. I've focused on HTML, CSS, and JavaScript. Additionally, I have a BA in Journalism. In my spare time, I have done freelance work for a local newspaper. This has been a long and slow process. :cry:
Computer Code and Journalism Skills

What are the short stories that everyone writes?

I think there are some short stories that everyone tries to write at some point. For example, who hasn't written a story about a writer at one time or another? I think bank robbery stories are another common idea that many writers try and make their own. And writers with any sort of connection to war have probably written a story about war. There is the story that takes place in a bar. There is the story of a breakup. There is the story that starts by waking up from a dream that we later learn is an overdone and a hard sell. But, for most of these common ideas, I think writers can make these ideas there own. What do you guys think? Can we put our own spin on these ideas to make them work? Obviously, many writers do. Or do you try and stay away from these because you know editors have read a hundred bank robbery stories? Also, what sort of stories do you think are typical for writers to try writing? Should we try and stay away from them or not?
What are the short stories that everyone writes?

Grammar, Who Needs Grammar?

Drop your trousers here for best results.
-Sign in a Bangkok dry cleaner
Grammar, Who Needs Grammar?

So let's say you queried...

...then realized the book wasn't ready to be queried, stopped querying, only then you had a new book, totally ready to be queried, that's perfect for a different agent at an agency you queried the first book at. Suppose also that you never heard back from the other agent about the first project but you're sure it's a no because it's just a bad book. Could you email the first agent, say "I'm withdrawing this", then query the other agent at that agency about the new book? Or do you just wait and wait and wait until the old query has gone stale and been forgotten, then query the new book with the new agent?
So let's say you queried...

Trials, tribulations and travails of a toilet.

I'm in the middle of this and feel the need to rant/share some of the issues I'm encountering based on my choice of toilet 7 years ago.

Against the advice of my husband I opted for a curvy, fully enclosed, flush (sic.) fitting toilet when we re built the back of the house.

The seat broke. The fixings are enclosed by the toilet bowl moulding.

"Aha", thinks I, "the nuts the toilet seat screws into will be fixed in place underneath so I can just pop the old seat off and screw in a new one". Oh no they're ****ing not. That would be sensible. Donk goes the nut inside the enclosed cavity.

"Aha, I can detach or move aside the cistern and that should give me enough room to wiggle my hand and a spanner in underneath to be able to attach the new seat. LOL, nope.

I've now turned the water off, unstuck the bowl from the tiles, shuffled it forwards and discovered that I'm going to have to detach the water in pipe to get enough space to work in. The fixings I need to undo are in an incredibly tight space and my spanners are rather large and I can't find my baby set. AAAAAARGH!

My hands are blue from the toilet blocks deposits. I said to husband that I would fix it when it had problems so he is out too lunch with friends and I am at home having to sod about removing and then replumbing a toilet. I got something brown and grey on my hands. *shudder*.

It's a Sunday on a bank holiday weekend so I can't even say sod it and call in someone to do it for me. The temptation to get in the car and buy another toilet that has fixings I can actually get to without having to pull it off the wall is nigh on overwhelming.

I am having tea and then I shall continue.

In summary:

#1. Just buy a normal toilet.
#2. Never assume something has been designed the way you would do it. Turns out the fittings were meant to be loosened then wiggled to one side to allow the fitting of a replacement seat. I realised this thirty seconds after the "donk" noise. Bah.
#3. Try not to buy things with non standard fittings. Turns out that even if I hadn't been dumb enough to undo the bolt all the way I would not have been able to buy a replacement that would mate with the fittings we have in place.

Bugger.

There you go. Learn from my pain. Offer suggestions on how to cope with a loving husband that says "I told you so" then passes you the toolbox.
Trials, tribulations and travails of a toilet.

Spark

When I was a kid I struggled a lot in school because I had 4 learning disabilities but did not know it. I had no self-esteem and was depressed and was being bullied but one teacher saw something in me and encouraged me to write. I can't remember his name now which really bugs me about I can remember what he said to me just before he went back to Canada he said to me when my books are released in Canada in the future he will be first in line to purchase them. This poem is about him. He saw something in me and helped me to make it grow. He gave me confidence and my first ever A which was amazing to me at the time. I thought I wasn't capable of anything above a C grade. He made me feel smart for the first time in my life.

Spark

I am the person you don’t see
I blend into the background, I’m part of the scenery
I exist alone, I’m in a bubble, in my own little world
You may think I’m sad, or maybe a little weird
People often sneer, say mean things that they think I don’t hear.
I walked the halls alone, kept to myself, learnt to disappear
I feared my peers and the cruel words that they threw like spears
I found comfort in books, in the written word
I disappeared into language, and found something there
A spark of something, watch it blaze, watch it flare
I took that flicker, that tiny thing, and made into a wonderful gleam
And I began to grin
I had something now, it was small, but it made me proud
I could stand up taller now
I’d found something I could help flourish
I no longer felt like I was rubbish
And you noticed, you saw that spark
And gave me my first high English mark
I’ll never forget that moment, my utter shock
It was the first time I’d ever felt smart
Spark

Getting a Manicure in the Wild West?

samedi 29 août 2015

In the Western I'm currently working on, one of my characters has a unique habit: he's a dandy, and so fastidious, he even gets regular manicures. It's a true story, and the character's manicured nails are straight out of the history books, but the idea of that level of personal grooming in that place and time seems almost unbelievable.

Where, exactly, would a man go to get a manicure in a remote, 1870s mining town in Nevada? I assume it probably was a DIY project, but I don't want to assume wrong. If it was a DIY, would the tools and process be relatively the same as it is today(barring modern chemicals and practices)? If not, where does the process differ?

Any experts in 19th century hygiene out there? Guns and blood and guts and horses and cards I can do. Hair and nails? Not so much.
Getting a Manicure in the Wild West?

Australian Parents Retract Original Birth Announcement Of Their Transgendered Child

The ad reads:

Quote:

"In 1995 we announced the arrival of our sprogget, Elizabeth Anne as a daughter. Oops! Our bad. We would now like to present, our wonderful son-Kai Bogert. Loving you is the easiest thing in the world. Tidy your room."
Quote:

Kai was shocked by his mum’s openness.
“I am so happy with what she has done. This last week has changed everything for me,” Kai said.
“I am still me but I am more me than I was a few days ago and feel free
Australian Parents Retract Original Birth Announcement Of Their Transgendered Child

99¢ Kindle sale: Raymond Chandler sleuths the mystery of The Kept Girl in 1920s L.A.

Welcome to "Kept Days," as we count down the action in The Kept Girl, my 1920s cult murder mystery.

In the Kindle store, The Kept Girl (regularly priced $5.99) is on sale for just .99 cents!

Day one, August 29, 1929 - The investigation into the Great Eleven cult begins as tipsy oilman Raymond Chandler is asked to look into possible financial improprieties involving the dim-witted nephew of his employer, Joseph Dabney.

You can read chapter one here.

If you prefer the paperback edition, use the discount code "chandlerinlove" for $5 off directly from Esotouric Ink.

Synopsis: Los Angeles, 1929: a glittering metropolis on the crest of an epic crash. A mysterious prophetess and her alluring daughter have relieved an oil tycoon's nephew of his fortune. But the kid won't talk. To find the money, the old man calls on a trusted executive, Raymond Chandler, who in turn enlists the aid of his devoted secretary/mistress, Muriel Fischer, and their idealistic patrolman friend Tom James.

Soon the nephew is revealed as a high-ranking member of a murderous cult of angel worshippers, and the trio plunges into an investigation that sends them careening across Southern California, from sinister sanitariums to roadside burger stands, decaying Bunker Hill mansions to sparkling cocktail parties, taxi dance halls to the morgue, all in search of the secretive Great Eleven. But when Muriel goes undercover to infiltrate the group's rural lair, she comes face to face with disturbing truths that threaten to spoil everything, not just for the cult's members, but for herself as well.

A work of fiction inspired by actual events and featuring the real-life cop who is a likely model for the mature Chandler's greatest creation, private eye Philip Marlowe, Kim Cooper's The Kept Girl exposes a mystery so horrifying, it could only be true.


What the Critics are Saying:

"Commendable." - Kirkus Reviews... "Holy cats, this woman can write! Kim Cooper's The Kept Girl evokes 1920s Los Angeles in general and especially Raymond Chandler magnificently, without ever stooping to mere ventriloquism. It abounds in grace notes, snappy character sketches and, yes, similes that keep their dignity even in the presence of the master." - David Kipen, editor of The WPA Guide to Los Angeles... "Kim Cooper is the perfect Virgil to 1929 Los Angeles, a city that was both a paradise and an inferno. Her knowledge of the city that was is unparalleled, her imagination unnerving. The real-life characters and crimes that would give birth to the pulp fiction of the 1930s and the film noir of the 1940s can all be found here. Aficionados of noir Los Angeles will read The Kept Girl with fascination and with growing horror as the terrible crime at its core is revealed." - John Buntin, author of L.A. Noir... "Nervy, bold, and shot through with a deep sense of Los Angeles history--the kind that feels practically tactile, as all the best noir narratives do Kim Cooper's The Kept Girl is a delightful addition to this city's literature. The effortlessness with which it borrows against the Chandler tradition while at the same time retaining its unique intelligence and slyly contemporary flavor is just plain stunning. I can't commend it highly enough." - Matthew Specktor, author of American Dream Machine

What Readers are Saying:
"Plot, character, pacing and period detail are all impeccably rendered here, bolstered by the author's deep knowledge of Los Angeles history." (Mike Stax)... "I couldn't put this book down; RIVETING. Well-written, brilliantly researched, totally compelling and fascinating." (Thessaly Lerner)... "The story she weaves is complex and richly detailed. The mix of fact and fiction could have been daunting for a first-time novelist, but Kim Cooper understands this turf like a beat cop." (A. Schaeffer)... "Cooper's writing style is wonderful, warm and inviting, and rich with ambiance... a deeply delicious read." (Unabridged Chick)... "Kim Cooper has always been a terrific historian, but very few terrific historians can write a story this well. Just wonderful work." (sirmarktwang)
99¢ Kindle sale: Raymond Chandler sleuths the mystery of The Kept Girl in 1920s L.A.

Maslanka, Bogna

Title: Free At Last
Author(s):
Bogna Maslanka
Publication Date:
August 28th, 2015
Publisher:
Captive Unicorn
Format:
eBook
Price: $
3.99
Logline or Blurb:

Free at last from the cloistered suffocation of his parents' home, when Lukas goes away to school, he begins a sexual exploration which brings unknown and surprising pleasures. A conflicted Lukas struggles with how to respond to Hedley, the experienced potential lover who torments him mercilessly yet makes him explode with desire. Will Lukas reject Hedley's abuse, or surrender the most secret recesses of his body to the rapture Hedley offers?


Link: http://ift.tt/1hok0Jo
Link to author's website: http://ift.tt/1hM2vna


Maslanka, Bogna

Texas Deputy Gunned Down Execution Style

This all happened within the last 24 hours.

Quote:

A 30-year-old Texas man faces capital murder charges in connection with the "execution-style shooting" of Deputy Darren H. Goforth at a Houston-area gas station, Harris County Sheriff Ron Hickman said Saturday.

The suspect, identified as Shannon J. Miles, had been in police custody since early Saturday, even as authorities pleaded for the public's help in identifying the man who fatally shot the sheriff's deputy in the back in what was described as a "cold-blooded execution."
Miles criminal history includes charges of resisting arrest, trespassing, evading detention and disorderly conduct with a firearm, Hickman said.
The motive in the Friday shooting, which Hickman described as "senseless and cowardly," is still unclear, but Goforth appears to have been targeted merely "because he wore a uniform," the sheriff told reporters.
"We found no other motive or indication that it was anything other than that," said Hickman, adding that he doesn't believe the suspect and Goforth knew each other.
Hickman said "a big gun ... a handgun" was used in the shooting and ballistic tests on a weapon that was recovered matched the one used to kill Goforth.
Now some in law enforcement are thinking this might be similar to what happened to those 2 police officers who were killed in NY, however I don't think we really know enough to come to that conclusion yet.

Quote:

The suspect shot Goforth, 47, while the deputy was filling up his patrol car at the station just after 8:30 p.m. (9:30 p.m. ET), Hickman said.
"Deputy Goforth was refueling his vehicle and returning to his car from inside the convenience store when, unprovoked, a man walked up behind him and literally shot him to death," he said.
Goforth was shot multiple times from behind and then fell to the ground, where the suspect shot the deputy multiple times again, said Deputy Thomas Gilliland, a spokesman for the sheriff's office.
Goforth, a 10-year veteran of the Harris County Sheriff's Office, died at the scene in what appeared to be "an unprovoked, execution-style killing," Hickman said.
"I have been in law enforcement (for) 45 years," the sheriff said. "I don't recall another incident this cold-blooded and cowardly."
Texas Deputy Gunned Down Execution Style

Christie: Track Immigrants Like FedEx Packages

http://ift.tt/1LCTq9S

So how does that work? Are you going to tattoo barcodes on their asses when they cross the border? And then install several trillion readers on the streets all over the country?
Christie: Track Immigrants Like FedEx Packages

Cover reveal: HUNTED!

I thought I'd present to you an early look at the cover of my new book HUNTED, which I will release in August. The cover has been custom created by Lieu Pham over at Covertopia.com and captures, I feel, the setting and the atmosphere of the story perfectly.


The book itself is a replacement for the previously released Jason Dark mystery "Fu Man Chu's Vampire," which I am replacing entirely.


This new version of the story has been significantly revised, rewritten and expanded upon, almost doubling it's length, adding new plot points etc. It is kind of an experiment for me to see if such a rework allows me to rekindle interest in the series. It will be interesting to observe.

What do you guys think?


Cover reveal: HUNTED!

Protest Anthems?

I'm trying to create a playlist of anthemic protest songs, the kind of music that makes you want to march in the streets and fight the power.

I'm not having much trouble finding punk, rock, and rap songs that fit the bill, but I'm hoping to widen the scope a bit more, and I'm looking for inspiring songs from other musical styles.

Folk songs are good for the protest side, but I'm having trouble finding many that seem to have the energizing quality I'm looking for. I'd love some suggestions.

And if anyone has any ideas for songs along the lines of "Do You Hear The People Sing" from Les Miserables, that's be excellent.

Any ideas?
Protest Anthems?

Fancy photography

My main character is in her late teens and has been interested in photography since she was a kid.

The problem is, I have no idea how fancy digital cameras work! I have tried reading up on features, use instructions, etc., but the truth is I neither know anyone in-person who can explain, nor do I think this is something I could figure out on my own. Is there a SIMPLE explanation as to the basic way someone uses these cameras and the terminology that a hobby photographer would use while taking pictures? All I know is that the cameras are very expensive, the lens even moreso, and there is something to adjust in terms of lighting and shutter speed.

Also, the way I currently have it written, her brother found her a cheap Rebel at a garage sale. Is this at all plausible? This would be sometime in the 1990s, before every person with Internet access was a photo blogger. I chose a Rebel because I read a few professional photography blogs' FAQs sections, and several photographers mentioned that this was their first professional camera. Also, what kind of lens might a middle-class college student own? Would she know anything about devleping the pictures? Even if she uses a digital camera, would it be likely that she's familiar with dark rooms, the way a writer who uses a laptop to type might be interested in old typewriters nonetheless?
Fancy photography

What writers, if any, have made you laugh?

My first choice would be Robert Benchley, the funniest writer in his, or anyone else's time. Also, S.J. Perelman and E.F. Benson, author of the Lucia stories.
What writers, if any, have made you laugh?

American English or UK English

I have the first six chapters of my translated novel back from my proof-reader, accompanied by a note that my text is a mix of British and American English and asking which one I wanted to use.

He is British and I am Icelandic. I set my document for UK English really just for the sake of convenience, given his nationality. Is there ANY reason I shouldn't just go with the UK version? That doesn't turn American readers off or anything? My fist English-language book hasn't gotten a lot of sales, but the vast majority has been in America.
American English or UK English

It's VOTE_BOT's Spectacular Poetry Contest Poll!

Responses are anonymous and the data will only be used as a snapshot of community opinion and, maybe, a little bit later on to determine who will be sold off for scientific experiments. But (mostly) just the first one (for now).

Thank you for participating in the poll.
It's VOTE_BOT's Spectacular Poetry Contest Poll!

UK: When politics go mad. Jeremy Corbyn's very likely win

If you took Bernie Sanders, drilled some true socialism into him rather than the mild case of social democracy he has, sent him into a cottage in the woods for a week without a razor, then you're getting a little closer to who Jeremy Corbyn is, politically and personally.

Jeremy Corbyn has puttered about in his allotment between his visits to the House of Commons for the last 30 years. A remnant of a long distant Labour party past. Except, now not so much.

A few months ago, Jeremy accepted to the role of sacrificial lamb. After the general election defeat, there was to be a leadership contest. Corbyn accepted that he, like Diane Abbot the last time, was to be the candidate that got 5 per cent of the vote. That way, Corbyn could go back to his allotment, and back to his constituency work. Except, that's not what is happening.

It is difficult to explain. The candidates for Labour party leadership are four:

* Andy Burnham, a slippery spin politician who leans in whatever direction the political wind is blowing. In one week he can deliver a speech to KPMG, the global accounting firm that handle the tax dodging of multinationals, and claim that the last Labour leader wasn't sensitive enough to the needs of big business. The week after he can deliver a full-throated attack on corporate greed and the corporate tax dodging firms like KPMG handle for their clients.

* Yvette Cooper. If they built a politician robot, it would look and act like her. She doesn't offer any policy, except when it's absolutely necessary, and then it will be bland and carefully scripted.

* Liz Kendall is like if the Democratic Party had a Ted Cruz in it, and that version of Ted Cruz talked only about how the Democratic party must learn from its defeat in May and become like the real Ted Cruz in the republican party. That's Liz Kendall for you.

* And then you have the token leftie, the sacrificial lamp, the one who was invited to the leadership contest to “broaden the debate”, and who would then do the proper thing and lose really badly so that the proper politicians – Cooper, Burnham, or Kendall – could go on and do proper politics. Except he's not losing. He's winning. And it's driving the establishment absolutely nuts.

Which is why this extraordinary article appeared in today's Observer newspaper. The former Prime Minister Tony Blair basically crashes onto the stage, tie undone, one side of the shirt hanging outside his trousers, the eyes blood-shot with alarm, shrieking: “What the hell do you think you're doing?!” to the voters in the contest. “You have to vote for one of the other three. Are you mad?!”

http://ift.tt/1LJLiHl

Somewhere, on an allotment in Islington, the 66 year old Jeremy Corbyn is smiling smugly as he pours another strong tea from his thermos, and wrap his disheveled jumper tighter around himself. Corbyn is winning. And it looks like he's going to win big. When the leadership contest started, the odds was 100 to 1 that he would. But now, it looks like everyone in the party hierarchy is starting to concede.

Politics have gone mad over here too. Just thought I'd mention that to you.
UK: When politics go mad. Jeremy Corbyn's very likely win

Must-read horror shorts?

So I have this horror short story/novella thing I'm working on. Problem is... I don't read horror. I'm easily scared. I call them "daylight books". But this thing won't leave me alone, and I have places that it would be good to submit it to, so I kind of need to get used to horror. So I need a list of must-read horror short stories. I've got basically every Lovecraft piece I can get my hands on on hold at the library, because there are Eldritch elements to this; but I need more recommendations than that. Preferably short but I'll read a novel if it grabs on page one and doesn't let go. Thanks!
Must-read horror shorts?

Just when you thought the GOP Presidental race couldn't get more funner:

Just when you thought the GOP Presidental race couldn't get more funner:

I have a grammar issue

I'm trying to do a sentence. The FIRST sentence of the chapter, but I'm having issues on how to word it and where the punctuation's go.

"Christa, a woman in her mid-thirties, tall and dangerous looking but soft-spoken and gentle as a kitten, walked through the back streets of Ergastulum."

See, I'm not sure if i have too many commas. help?
I have a grammar issue

Storm Rising A Kelli Storm Novel out now from Three Worlds Press

New release from Three Worlds Press and author Kenneth Hoss, book one in a four book series.

Storm Rising A Kelli Storm Novel

When a murder investigation turns Detective Kelli Storm’s attention to a drug kingpin, the last thing she expected was to find a link to her father’s killer from twenty years earlier.
The Washington Height's neighborhood has turned deadly for NYPD detectives Kelli Storm and Bill Hayes.

A young woman is murdered and Kelli tracks the killer to a Gentleman’s Club in Manhattan. After an unwilling witness is assaulted and left dying, Kelli and Bill turn their investigation in a new and more dangerous direction. When the DEA steps in and takes over, Kelli is forced off the case.

Working behind the scenes, she pulls out one of her father’s old case files and starts making connections she never would have dreamed possible. An old gun, new witnesses and danger lurking in the shadows have storms rising all over New York City.



Available on Amazon and iTunes. In bookstores soon!
Storm Rising A Kelli Storm Novel out now from Three Worlds Press

Amazing!

OH MY Goodness! I was looking up something on word count, and a post in this forum came up and I thought "Hey, I think I remember belonging to that forum years ago! So I took a guess on my user name and password and I got logged in! Cool. I am not sure why I left. I think I was angry at someone. Anyway times have changed. I haven't written anything in years. I wrote about 13 novels while comming to this site, and had big dreams of publishing then. Those dreams died. Now I am doing other things, but I plan on writing for NANOWRIMO, so I am thinking about the book I want to write.

A huge amount of things have happened to me since then. I have to go into my profile to see exactly when the last time I logged in was.

Interesting! I do not have a lot of time for forums, but I will log in sometimes maybe.

Chow! Katy
Amazing!

Hi Everyone

Hi everyone. I've been lurking for a while and thought that I'd join in the fun.
Hi Everyone

Your worst gig?

The one where you went into a concert thinking you were going to love it and came wishing a plague of boils on the band, roadies, audience, bar staff and passers-by. We've all had one, right? Any nominations?
Your worst gig?

Best resources for writing short fiction?

(Please don't say "read more short fiction", that one's a given. Although if you have recommended shorts or collections of shorts to read, especially specfic, that's more than welcome.)

I have resource on resource for writing and editing and revising and publishing novels, but nothing specifically for short fiction. The difference in structure is foreign to me. Does anyone have any good articles or books they'd recommend for it?
Best resources for writing short fiction?

Self-publishing an adult colouring book

I've been working on a few adult (i.e. grown up, not sexy) colouring designs and I'm thinking about putting them together to make a book. I don't really anticipate making money on this, it's more for fun.

But I do want the printed books to be good quality, on nice paper that doesn't bleed. Does anyone have recent experience with Createspace or Lulu printed books and paper quality? I was planning either saddlestitch or coil binding, to make it easier for the book to lie flat.


ETA: Sorry, I meant this to be in the Self-publishing forum. Perhaps a mod could move it?
Self-publishing an adult colouring book

71 Syrian refugees found suffocated in truck in Austria

No thread on this yet? I don't have any words either, but I thought there should be a thread.

http://ift.tt/1IszJNi

Quote:

Reports suggest that the majority of the 71 people who died of suffocation inside a truck found this week in Austria were refugees from Syria. If confirmed, the grisly incident would be yet another bloody episode in Syria's brutal civil war.


The conflict, now in its fifth year, has forced more than 4 million Syrians to flee the country, according to U.N. statistics. An additional 7.6 million Syrians are considered internally displaced, meaning that, since 2011, roughly half of all Syrians have been forced to leave their homes.
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Some European governments have reacted with apprehension and indignation at the prospect of having to accommodate the new influx. Only a few, particularly Germany, have wholeheartedly accepted the responsibilities of dealing with the plight of Syria's refugees.

The Syrian Observatory of Human Rights, which has diligently tracked reports of casualties since the start of the conflict, claims that more than 310,000 Syrians have died as a result of the war since 2011. Civilian deaths happen in all sorts of terrible ways — from mass executions and suicide bombings carried about jihadist groups to the almost routinebarrel-bombing of populated areas by the Assad regime, t0 even wayward U.S. and coalition airstrikes.
71 Syrian refugees found suffocated in truck in Austria

Hello to everyone

A pleasure to be here. At first, I'll just poke around in all corners, trying to have some fun and help others have fun too. And then...we'll see:)
Hello to everyone

Teen on trial for goading and urging her boyfriend to commit suicide

vendredi 28 août 2015

I read about this case before it went to trial and it's one of those things where the more you know, the heavier it gets.

Michelle Carter and Conrad Roy were, essentially, in a virtual relationship. They'd met a couple of times over the course of two years, but according to the official reports, the pair spent much time talking on the telephone and had exchanged thousands of text messages.

But it's the only last several dozen of them that are pertinent.

Conrad Roy was a depressed young man. Their talks often turned to his contemplating suicide. Last summer, Michelle Carter made a project of prodding him onwards.

Here's a sample -

Quote:

"You have to just do it," she texted him, according to the documents. "You have everything you need. There is no way you can fail. Tonight is the night. It's now or never."When Roy expressed hesitancy at going through with his plan, Carter sent him text messages expressing her frustration.
"You always say you're gonna do it, but you never do," she texted. "I just want to make sure tonight is the real thing."
Quote:

The teen went so far as to help Roy research the best method of siphoning carbon monoxide into his truck. Carter told Roy he was making up excuses not to go through with the suicide when discussing the siphoning plan. “But I bet you’re gonna be like ‘oh, it didn’t work because I didn’t tape the tube right or something like that,’" she texted. "I bet you’re gonna say an excuse like that...you seem to always have an excuse.”
And if carbon monoxide poisoning didn't work? "Try the bag or hanging," she told him.
Quote:

CONRAD: I just don't know how to leave them, you know. CARTER: Say you're gonna go to the store or something
CONRAD: Like, I want them to know that I love them.
CARTER: They know. That's one thing they definitely know. You're over thinking.
CONRAD: I know I'm over thinking. I've been over thinking for a while now.
CARTER: I know. You just have to do it like you said. Are you gonna do it now?
Not only did he "do it", but records show that she talked him back into the truck when he jumped out once he started feeling the effects of the carbon monoxide.

He died in his truck on July 13th of last year. Now Michelle Carter is on trial for involuntary manslaughter - which, in my opinion, sounds like a pretty sweet deal. Court documents show that Carter had no idea idea that the police would look at his phone records, since it was a suicide. She sent panicked, incriminating texts to a friend when she realized what sort of trouble she was facing.

Quote:

Carter sent a frantic text to her friend after she spoke to Roy's mother, who said cops would be looking at the boy's cellphone.
"It's something [cops] have to do with suicides and homicides and [Roy's mother] said they have to go through his phone and see if anyone encouraged him to do it on text and stuff," she told her friend. "[If] they read my messages with him I'm done. His family will hate me and I can go to jail."
Her defense attorney is trying to get the charges dismissed.

It's such a mild charge for the coldness of the crime, but I imagine that was all they could charge her with.

Regardless of the outcome of the trial, though, I'm stuck in a facet of this case. I can't get past imagining what her family must be thinking and feeling. How do you view such a creature that you've spawned? They can't even have the refuge of sanity-saving speculating that it can't be as bad as it sounds, because technology has afforded them an exact transcript of her utterly evil machinations.

I'm pretty good at constructing a "what if" cage-n-stage for myself to hazard a guess at how I might react to all kinds of things. But this one defeats me. I can't even imagine it.
Teen on trial for goading and urging her boyfriend to commit suicide

New experiment verifies quantum spookiness

New experiment verifies quantum spookiness

Quote:

Originally Posted by Science News
It’s official: Quantum mechanics is spooky.

A new experiment provides the best evidence yet that the common-sense concept of locality — that an event on Earth can’t immediately influence what happens on Mars, for instance — doesn’t apply in the quantum realm.

Researchers have long thought that quantum theory is nonlocal. But airtight experimental confirmation has been difficult to achieve. Now a new paper, posted online August 26 at arXiv.org, closes two loopholes that had cast a smidgen of doubt on previous results from a crucial test.

...

The new Bell test by Bas Hensen, a quantum physicist at Delft University of Technology in the Netherlands, and colleagues required two diamond chips that were placed in labs nearly 1.3 kilometers apart. Each chip contained a tiny defect with an electron inside. The researchers zapped the diamonds with lasers, which spurred each chip to emit a photon that was entangled with the electron. Those photons were sent to a third lab (located between the other labs) and fed through a beam splitter. Whenever detectors at the ends of the beam splitter captured two photons at the same time, there was a transfer of entanglement — now the electrons in the two chips were entangled with each other. Then the researchers randomly performed one of two measurements on the electrons’ spin. The physicists confirmed that the outcomes of those measurements matched more often than Bell’s limit.

...

New experiment verifies quantum spookiness

Is Author101 University Conference Legit?

I'm new to this site and I'm not sure if this is the right place to ask this question, but I would like to hear from people about their impressions of Author101 University and their upcoming conference in October. I've 'won' two free registrations to the conference but I'm just not sure if it is all it says it is. I've finished writing my first fiction novel and it is with a hybrid publishing company and scheduled to be available later this year but I really need to learn much, much more about marketing and promotions. I also want to focus on nonfiction areas that I have a great deal of experience and skills with that I think might be of help to others (higher education, science, lifelong learning, surviving abuse, surviving in an able-bodied world).

I want to make the switch from working full time to writing full time but this means I have to create an income from writing. Author 101 University makes all kinds of claims and I see both positive and negative comments on the internet. If I attend the conference, it means having to borrow money for the flight and hotel since I really can't afford it on my own. I'm also physically disabled so it means transporting my scooter and going through the physical demands of attending a full conference.

What is your opinion of this company? Is the conference worth my time, money, and effort?
Is Author101 University Conference Legit?

Help me XD

I finished Fragment weeks ago with over 40K words That was fine and all, as I intended to make each book of the series this length.
Until reading submission guidelines for old time's sake and chatting with an editor.
Now, writing lengthy pieces is nothing new to me. Sitting on my computer right now is an unpublished 80K novel and an unpublished 104K monster.
-_- I knew from the get-go that 40K is the absolute bare minimum for a novel but most publishers demote it to the novella zone or outright refuse to go under 50-60K (even 80K).

Anyway to the point:

I decided to write 10K words --- 2 additional scenes. The scenes fit right into the story and show some events that I accidentally told anyway. I prefer to show events anyway, not tell.
--I want to get this 10K written asap. Probably is, IT'S DIFFICULT. Do anyone have any techniques or suggestions on how to write 10K within 1-3 days. I outlined both the chapters (sequence of events), but it's pretty hard to focus. The outlines may not even make 5K per chapter. (Not to mention that's pretty damn long for a chapter in this once 40K novel. That may create inconsistency.)

Argh! I wish 40K wasn't such a problem for publishers. I did decide to add 10K. Not giving in now...
It's funny because it took me 3 days to write my newest 5K short story (Mind Control 3). Of course I winged that.. No outline as it was in first person... Fragment in 3rd person takes a bit more skill.

I know I rambled but thanks for listening to this sailor.
Help me XD

Where do you start?

Not with submitting. I have the 2015 Novel and Short Story Writer's Market waiting for that. I have Horror Tree perpetually open for finding markets for specfic shorts. What I don't know is what to start with for the writing. Do I start with a short thing I can probably get done in a day? With the 10k long-short-story-slash-novella I have two places I want to submit to? With one of my old pieces that I can probably strip down, restain (I watch too many design shows), and make into a publishable piece?

I have very little experience writing short stories, but more ideas than anyone could possibly write in a lifetime (unless we're talking, like, drabbles for each). I just don't know where to start.
Where do you start?

How do you handle passing characters in your writing?

Obviously this is going to vary based on genre, and I'm asking from the perspective of a realist novel writer.

Do you ever introduce new characters late into the storyline?

Is there a set number of characters that you never tend to go over?

How do you handle the need for your main character to interact with others, yet you don't want to introduce too many 2D, underdeveloped characters?

Do you feel that the majority of the characters in your works need to be fleshed out and believable?

I personally love books for tone and well-fleshed characters, but I myself struggle with not introducing some random person for a few pages simply because I need my main characters to interact with someone. I'm wondering how other writers handle this. Does it vary based on the narrator? For instance, Humbert Humbert certainly didn't flesh out anyone but himself, nor would it have been in-character for him to do so. I don't know, general thoughts on the idea of non-central characters?
How do you handle passing characters in your writing?

Hello AW! I would like to introduce myself and ramble

I'm so happy to have found AW! I've been stalking various threads in the half-day between signing up and being approved to post and am excited to make my own post.

A little about myself:

I have lived in California since I was a toddler, but next week I am moving to Grenada in the West Indies. I am terrified. (Hopefully the new life experiences will be plenty of writing fodder??)

I've worked soulless office jobs for the last 4 years but realized soon into it that I consider my "real job" the hours of writing I diligently complete evenings and weekends, whether I feel "inspired" to do them or not. The whole Grenada move obviously throws off my 9-to-5, and with this shift I hope to go back to grad school and become an elementary school teacher when I'm back in the States.

I recently . . . finished something. I'm not sure how to put it. I want to say that it's a "first draft," but to be honest, I am one of those horrible editors who will go back and redo my writing paragraph by painstaking paragraph, so in some ways it is simultaneously a first draft and a millionth draft. Anyway, it's fairly long, I don't think it is publishable, and it's only now, after years of working on my own and being a "hobby writer" that I've burrowed out of my writing to look into writing communities, discussions on writing, writing workshops, etc.

I hope that AW inspires me to write more, helps me revise some more (I feel like it's an endless process that's enjoyable but also unsatisfying), and allows me to talk about my writing and writing in general, as I've always been a bit embarassed that I aspire to write at all. When people ask what I do for a living, I have to cite my office job. And when they go on to ask if I enjoy it, I usually say no, I actually want to be a teacher, and that's that. But the truth is that while I've always viewed writing as something I would do as a necessity, because I enjoy it, love it, all that, I WOULD love to be A Writer. As in someone who makes a buck or two and can see her name in print. If it's not my full-time, make-a-living day job that's fine, as I also love teaching and working with children, but it would be so wonderful to have the validation and . . . sense of self, I suppose. *I* view myself as a writer, but it feels like a secret identity because no one knows I write.

Sorry for the ramble. I guess I wouldn't be here if I didn't like words.
Hello AW! I would like to introduce myself and ramble

Beta swap for 85k steampunk fantasy MS close to querying?

Hi! I'm looking for a potential beta reader in a similar situation as I am with similar goals/needs so that we can make the most of each other's time.

I am in the late revision stage of an 85k steampunk fantasy novel that I am seeking to have polished and ready to query in the next month or so. I am looking for a beta with an interest in the subject matter of the novel (to avoid my current problem of having too many well-meaning literary fiction friends whose response has been something like "I like this a lot but I can't offer you much because I hate fantasy fiction"). If you're interested in the sociopolitical side of steampunk universes, and are craving some diversity in your fantasy and a strong feminist bent, this project may interest you.

I am not looking for line editing, finickiness about genre, etc. I am looking for someone who is open-minded and serious about the traditional publishing process, who can commit to reading through the entire manuscript in about two weeks. I am willing to do the same in exchange. I am primarily concerned with pacing, the strength of the characters, and what can be "tweaked" about the manuscript before querying agents. I am happy to critique for my beta according to the needs of their own ms.

I would be happy to exchange writing samples prior to committing to reading each other's entire manuscripts, just to make sure we are compatible in mindset and understand the basic intention of each other's work. If you are at a similar stage in your WIP and are a reliable reader with some free time in the next few weeks, please feel free to PM me! :)
Beta swap for 85k steampunk fantasy MS close to querying?

Venomous animals

In the 11th chapter of Cubik's World an extended family learns about the desert.

The father organizes the people into a team.

The 2 younger children study spiders and other bugs. The 2 older children study small mammals like ground squirrels. The mother studies large mammals like coyotes. The paternal grandpa studies non-venomous lizards. The paternal grandma studies non-venomous snakes. The maternal grandpa studies Gila monsters. The maternal grandpa studies birds. The father studies venomous snakes.

The youngest child, a brother, gets stung by scorpions several times. The maternal grandpa gets bit by a Gila monster. If the brother and maternal grandpa both get venom inside them should I have a point in it where the father gets bit by a venomous snake?
Venomous animals

Query question: How do you include comps/what comps are appropriate to include?

I don't know if this is the right place to put it, but I don't know where else to put it.

How do comps work in query letters? Saying "readers of X will love this" seems trite. Is there a more... 'exciting' way of saying it?

Also, can you include comps that are a different age range? The book I'm editing right now has a lot of similarities with Alex Verus and The Dresden Files in terms of plot and narrator voice, but it's for a YA audience. Would it be appropriate/acceptable to say something like "Harry Dresden and Alex Verus come to the YA world blah blah blah" or "The Dresden Files and Alex Verus for the YA world"? Or should I scrap them as comps since they're adult fiction?
Query question: How do you include comps/what comps are appropriate to include?

On Cursing and Cultural Translation

So I wrote this book, which I guess technically qualifies as fantasy, and I'm running into some problems with the handling of cursing. This is a place without magic or supernatural abilities; it is a bleak setting with modern language. The style of the book is kind of gritty, full of sex and violence and insane levels of swearing. I already know that there is way too much cursing as it is -- I'm talking like 300 f-bombs in the completed first draft and a liberal spattering of every other curse word imaginable. I have to weed those suckers out like adverbs. But I'm really struggling with the question of what is too much.

Many of my beta readers have said the swearing removes them somewhat from the fantasy realm. There are two major cultures central to the book -- Asaltan and Levian. I kind of consider Asaltan the default/English and Levian is completely made up. So my hero, who is kinda rough, uses a ton of curses in Levian -- and people seem to like the Levian curse words a lot. They make them feel more immersed in the story. The real cursing doesn't seem to be ruining their experience of the book, but many have mentioned that they prefer the Levian.

Where I'm stuck, I guess, is I'm afraid the Levian words don't have as much emotional impact. They can't because we are not culturally conditioned to perceive them as obscene. I could go back and replace every single f-bomb with the Levian equivalent, but I'm afraid it will change the tone of the story too much. Also, it's a little weird because toward the end of the book I have a couple very explicit sex scenes and one graphic torture scene. I'm worried people will pick it up, start reading, and not realize just how adult it really is -- and that those scenes will lose something if I soften their impact. For example, there's a scene in which the hero calls the heroine a c**t, and I just don't see any other word having the same impact.

I've never written a fantasy before, and I'm sure that shows in how many fantasy rules I'm breaking here. I guess the question is where to find that balance -- should I have no modern curse words whatsoever? Half Levian and half English (Asaltan)? Only use the less offensive ones? Or just use them very sparingly?

If it's relevant, I plan to self-publish as I know this thing doesn't fit any one genre. So what the publisher will think is not really an issue. I'm concerned with the reader's experience.

Thanks!
On Cursing and Cultural Translation

How much should a part-timer charge?

What do you think someone should charge for a 300-500 word blog post? I've seen a few articles about this online, but they're all talking about someone who wants to make a living freelancing, whereas I'm only going to be doing it part-time. I'd have to do some research on the topics (DIY, cooking etc) but the amount of time it takes varies from post to post so it's kind of hard to estimate an hourly rate. I've seen some say 10 cents a word ($30 a post) is fine while others say it should be about 50 cents per word (about $150) or more...what's correct?

I do have a five years of experience, but I know I wasn't being paid a good rate before.

Thanks!
How much should a part-timer charge?

Is it a cred or is it not a cred?

I'm not a hundred-percent sure if this belongs here or one of the broader sub-sections of the forum, but I'm going to take a stab here first.

One of my short stories made honorable mention in Writers of the Future, but I'm not entirely sure if that's something I can put down as a cred in my cover letter bio. Is it a cred? Or would the story have to have won in order to qualify? Or is it a cred that belongs with the story's cover letter but not on my general submissions cover letter ("such-and-such story made honorable mention yada yada")? Said story is also a spin-off of my novel, so do I mention this with the novel or does it not matter?

I just don't want to seem like I'm over-blowing something as a cred when it's little more than a footnote.

Adding to this, I guess, I've won with WoTF on the Illustrator's side, was published by them, the whole thing, but I don't know if I can mention that one either. Is it a valid credit for a cover letter bio? Does it just make me look even more like a dabbling fake? (Oh, an artist who thinks they can write, ho-hum, insta-reject)

*sigh* I suck at talking about myself.
Is it a cred or is it not a cred?

US electoral system explained

The ongoing debates (August 2015) among potential Republican presidential candidates reminded me of a note I posted several years ago. Below is a link to an updated (and hopefully better) version of this note:


http://ift.tt/1MTpqIu


How can a retired teacher miss an opportunity for sharing what he thinks he understands better? Feel free to share the above link with all who might be interested, especially students. Comments will be appreciated, as usual.


Ludwik Kowalski, Ph.D. Professor Emeritus,
Montclair State University
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US electoral system explained

Well, that's it--Devin's book is officially queried.

I have a longstanding habit of sitting on things and not wanting to finish them. But given that Devin's rough draft was 80% of the way there, I shrugged and decided to go ahead and send out a query while I'm still editing. Just one. One little query to an agent I skipped on the last book I queried. It can't hurt me, might help me, and will definitely put a fire under my butt to get the whole book polished so I can query widely.
Well, that's it--Devin's book is officially queried.

Horror Tree

A lot of people probably already know this place but it's my number-one (so far only) resource for finding places that take specfic submissions: http://horrortree.com/ It finds open submissions for all forms of specfic short stories and lists their pay rates, deadlines, and all their submission guidelines. Some of the places pay a pro-rate, some semi-pro, some with token and a contributor's copy. But hey. Having a place that compiles all different specfic markets can't be bad for a specfic writer.
Horror Tree

The Bear's Wife Omnibus Countdown Deal

More thanks for everyone who helped me with crits, betas, and advice while I was writing The Bear's Wife. I've announced giveaways of Part 1 in the past, but this weekend the omnibus edition (including 7,000 words of bloopers and cut scenes) is on a Kindle Countdown Deal on Amazon.com and Amazon.co.uk. It's still 99c right now but'll go up to $1.99 soon.

If you'd like to see what you've all wrought, go get it ;)

Link: http://amzn.to/1LHCXDK
The Bear's Wife Omnibus Countdown Deal

Case Study: Conservative, evangelical takeover of Western horsemanship

This is a progressive process I've noticed for many years. I've been a horseman my entire life. I come from ranching people, like my Uncle Charles, a rancher in South Dakota, and my grandfather, a life-long horse dealer and trader. Both taught me to rope and ride. I live in New Mexico and help various friends push cattle around the forest on horseback. I'm a fair roper. Now, apparently, we're all supposed to be right-wing Christian evangelicals or we're not real ranching people. My evidence? I go to many regional horse shows, where I'm afflicted by calls to Jesus and worse. I have subscribed to the more and more right-wing Western Horseman (established 1937), the main journal in the field, all my life. I'm about ready to cancel my subscription. I've about had it with these people. Now when I walk around a horse show or sales barn I see endless crosses on peoples' hats, huge dangly silver cross earrings, and monster crosses on their belt buckles. And all of these folks are half my age or younger. Where on earth did they come from? Ranching has nothing to do with Jesus. It has a lot to do with water, fencing, and hay fields. But Jesus? Not at all. And, of course, being a registered Democrat I'm an agent of the devil. Or worse.

The whole process is interesting to me in the way that a particular view of the world can just take over and make other viewpoints invalid. The takeover of the public face of Western ranching by evangelical Christians is a small thing, I suppose. But I notice it and resent it.

I suspect similar things happen in other areas of life. But this assumption that you can't really rope and ride if you're not a born again evangelical really annoys me. It's enough to make me light up a smoke and crack open a can of beer at 8 AM in front of them just to get their goat. Cowboys have, traditionally, been young guys who drink and whore around as much as possible. But knowing history has never been a strength of these folks.

Your milage may vary, of course. Photo of me and my trusty horse below. Notice the absence of crosses.



I know a lesbian couple who run a big ranch south of town. Boy-oh-boy do they blow the minds of the newly born again. Especially because they inherited their ranch from one of the couple's parents, also a lesbian. Does not compute, must be wrong.
Case Study: Conservative, evangelical takeover of Western horsemanship

Militias in early 1770s Colonial Boston

I am looking for information about how militias operated in Colonial Boston around the time of the Boston Tea Party. I'm finding that there's a dearth of information for this period. Here's an example of what I'm finding:

"By the early 1770s, the militia’s primary function was to maintain public order, and one historian has described local militia musters as something “of a joke” since many men were “untrained, unarmed, and uninterested.” The situation changed dramatically in the spring of 1775 with the outbreak of open hostilities between the Americans and British forces."
(From http://ift.tt/1IpTfd8)

Does anyone know more about this somewhat dormant period leading up to the war? Info on training regimes would be helpful, though also the more bureaucratic processes, like if a captain were promoted to Major and then Colonel, how his authority would spread (to companies geographically adjacent to his own?)

Thanks!
Militias in early 1770s Colonial Boston

Hi Everyone!

On the outside chance that anyone is actually reading these - LOL - just want to introduce myself. I write under two pen names and soon-to-be three (once I get this historical done). Been writing non-fiction for 25 yrs for pay, fiction the past few years. Edit professionally. I hope to learn a bit about how other writers market, and also perhaps be of some use to new writers.
Hi Everyone!

A man and a woman eloped...

Thing is, she's technically married to someone else and the guy she ran away with is from a lower caste.

Therefore, as punishment, his sisters are to be raped and paraded naked around the village.

Someone tell me this is an extremely elaborate and tasteless joke.
A man and a woman eloped...

What is Wrong With School Choice?

We've been discussing inner city problems in other threads, including the lack of quality educations in many of these public schools, and how that contributes to the cycle of poverty, frustration, lack of agency, and violence. And it seems we can find numerous examples of how spending more $$ on education has not led to subsequent improvement in the quality of the education. (Washington D.C. as one example -- http://ift.tt/1KfpOCc )

So why is there such resistance to measures which give families access to more choices in where to send their kids to school?

ACLU sues to block sweeping Nevada education funding program

http://ift.tt/1KfpQtC

ACLU's side:
Quote:

"Parents have a right to send their children to religious schools, but they are not entitled to do so at taxpayers' expense," ACLU of Nevada Executive Director Tod Story said in a statement. "The voucher program violates the Nevada Constitution's robust protections against the use of public funds for religious education."
Quote:

The civil liberties groups say the program will use taxpayer dollars — more than $5,000 per child each year — for religious indoctrination at private schools that can discriminate in admissions and employment. In a conference call with reporters, they listed practices of Nevada schools that would receive the funds, including daily Bible study and daily Islamic prayer.

"The program would be a huge loss for religious liberty if implemented," ACLU attorney Heather L. Weaver said in a statement.
Republican/Libertarian side:
Quote:

Proponents of the Education Savings Accounts say the program gets around that by letting the parent decide where the money goes.

"The constitution constrains government action," said attorney Tim Keller of the Institute for Justice, a Virginia-based libertarian group that defends school choice measures and wants to work on the Nevada case. "Here, it's not the government making the decision, it's the parent."

Nevada lawmakers voted this spring to create the program, which is considered the broadest school choice initiative in the U.S. because it is not limited by family income level and will be open to the vast majority of Nevada children. The treasurer's office said it received about 2,800 applications for the program within a matter of weeks, even though funds are not expected to be disbursed until the spring.

Republicans have touted the program as a groundbreaking effort that will increase competition and improve education in Nevada, and called ACLU's challenge "regrettable."

"Instead of empowering parents to help their children find an educational environment that meets their needs, the ACLU wants to go back to a system of hard zoning, forcing poor and minority students into chronically failing schools and furthering cycles of generational poverty," said GOP state Sen. Ben Kieckhefer, who was instrumental in pushing the bill through the Legislature.
:Headbang:
What is Wrong With School Choice?

The Question Never Asked

I really enjoy interviews and there's usually a few questions that I wish the reporters would ask. I was curious about what other readers wanted when it came to author interviews. For example, Neil Gaiman always gets questions on writing Doctor Who but rarely on his daily frustrations and how in the hell can he tweet so much and still write at the same time?

I've started a blog recently reviewing books I've read and I like the idea of having author interviews, where I can get them. So, what are some questions you wish reporters would ask? What would YOU ask?
The Question Never Asked

That's a wrap! First draft of Call of the Morrigu DONE!

And Call of the Morrigu is finished! First draft is a wrap. The denouement was shorter than I had expected, but the climax scene was longer, so it all works out.

This one fought me. It's my fifth novel, and three of those were in a series. It's the shortest novel I've written yet (most were 100K). Historical fantasy. I struggled to get out 1000 words a day when I was getting more than 2000 words a day on the others. I took several weeks-long breaks, but finished it after four months. Yesterday, during the climax, is when I got my Flow on... 5500 words in a day, woohoo!

Now to stick it away for a couple weeks to simmer... a total of 58,600 words. I had expected around 60K originally. That will fluctuate up and down with edits, but I usually end up around the same in the end.
That's a wrap! First draft of Call of the Morrigu DONE!

Avon Impulse

I did a search of the forum, but couldn't seem to find anything on Avon Impulse.

Has anyone submitted to them?
Avon Impulse

Shane Carruth's Upstream Color and Primer

We didn't seem to have threads on these two masterpieces by the brilliant Carruth. Primer is largely considered the best time travel film, and it's as much a brain puzzle as it is a film. In a similar way Upstream Color surpasses Primer as both. Primer is more straight-forward hard science fiction and ethics lesson. Upstream Color is an emotional tone poem about the unseen connections that exist between things, using a worms' life cycle between human-pig-orchid. It's a story about modern life, mysterious trauma that lies below the surface of consciousness.

This discussion will get spoiler heavy very quickly. Though there will be no spoilers in this first post. If you haven't seen either of these films, they are both on Netflix. Nobody makes films with this much depth and personal control. Carruth finances his films himself. He serves as producer, director, writer, actor, and music composer. Primer was made for a ridiculous $7,000 dollars.

Do yourself a favor and watch his movies. It's well worth your time.
Shane Carruth's Upstream Color and Primer

Anyone doing genealogy research?

jeudi 27 août 2015

Is anyone working on their family tree?

My brother, who lives far away from me, is visiting this week and one of the things I wanted to do with him was to scan in the two boxes of genealogy papers that have been living in my garage.

One box is my own research, from the 1990s when I was somewhat interested in it, and the other box has my dad's research, which he was doing in the 80s and 90s. He died in 2000 and left this box of research, which has just been left to sit.

I'm trying to declutter my house and thought scanning all the records into a file would be best - but we went through the boxes and really couldn't decide what to do with most of it.

We're just going to keep a lot of it and put it back into my garage. ;) It all fits into one box now, which isn't a big deal to keep around. I don't think my brother and I will ever do anything with it, but maybe a cousin or someone else might want it at some point.

My brother said it would be a shame for dad's research to be in vain - just to be tossed - and I agree. He doesn't have children and I only have step kids, so he and I are the end of this family branch.

I looked at using Ancestry.com just to get dad's info out there for someone else to have access to, but it seems to cost $20 a month to really participate, and I'm not that interested / don't have the time right now to enter a lot of info into their database. Not sure what to do now ... :Shrug:
Anyone doing genealogy research?

Can't log into Blogger

I know that getting into Blogger now means going through the centralized Google login page. My records suggest I successfully did this in January, after changing my password. I don't remember the new password, and following all the recovery steps resulted in a series of dead ends as well as a confusing email.

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Subject: "Someone has your password"
Hi Dilo,
Someone just used your password to try to sign in to your Google Account xxxxxxxxx@aol.com.
Details:
Thursday, August 27, 2015 6:47 PM (Eastern Daylight Time)
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx, USA*
Google stopped this sign-in attempt, but you should review your recently used devices:

It seems that I somehow have my password.... or do I? Going to the "recently used devices" requires a password and starts the unsuccessful process again. I have Gmail accounts, but they're not associated with that blog.
Can't log into Blogger

Hey there! I'm new on here...

Hello! I'm new to forums, and stumbled onto this one while I was browsing online for some info on a particular topic. I'm not much of a writer myself (although I have been throwing around some ideas to start writing on again), but my dad was. He was an artist as well, and a good one too. But the piece I'm referring to here is a manuscript I have of his. I always remembered him working on a novel (and this was before computers, so it was all done on a typewriter, which I think is pretty cool), but I never read any of it. I was 17 when he died, and I'm 31 now, and after all these years I finally got my hands on it!!!:hooray: So I'm sure you can imagine how excited I am and anxious to read it! I'm only through the first chapter and I'm already so impressed. I always knew my dad was a very creative and cool guy (we were always so very close up until the day he died), but it's only now as I've gotten older that I can truly appreciate it. But, enough rambling, my main purpose for writing on here is to gain some insight and advice on how I can go about getting it published for him. I've been trying to research it but I'm finding a lot of different info, and just kind of overwhelmed with not knowing what's true and what's not. He wrote with an author name (not sure if there's an accurate name for that), and his real name isn't anywhere on the manuscript. I'm not even sure if he ever finished it, but as I get towards the ending I'll know for sure. What would be the best route to take in order to have this published for him? Thanks for any advice or words. It's all greatly appreciated!

-KB-
Hey there! I'm new on here...