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I've recently tried looking for representation for this MS with no success. I'm wondering if it's the query that's turning agents off or the sample chapters. If anyone would be willing to go over the first six chapters, I'd really appreciate it! Here's the query:
Lindsay doesn’t want to be a werewolf. She’s put up a front for her family and friends, kept guys at arm’s length, chained herself to the floor on the nights of the full moon, and avoided others of her kind for ten years. But now her little brother’s been kidnapped and sold overseas. Now she wishes her abilities were sharper and stronger than they are. Maybe then she wouldn’t have to trade her freedom for Wayne’s help. That might sound dramatic, but marrying this guy and moving to his secret all-werewolf settlement sure sounds like prison to Lindsay. He’s the only werewolf she knows who can help, though. She’ll do whatever he wants if it means her brother is returned home safely.
Their search leads them to Budapest. Wayne’s brooding, superior attitude, and tough outer shell start looking more like shields he hides his shy, awkward self behind. The beast Lindsay has been wrestling with all these years starts feeling less like an abomination and more like an exhilarating gift. By the time they find her brother, she's come to the conclusion that she was wrong about both of them. But being in Europe also brings Lindsay face to face with a werewolf alpha, whose mafia-boss-like reign is what got her brother sold. And if he isn’t stopped, there’s no telling what he’ll do to any other humans he finds irksome.
PM me if you're interested! I'm willing to beta read any sci-fi, fantasy, or regular YA fiction in return!
Beta Reader Wanted for first few chapters of NA Urban/Paranormal Fantasy
I've recently tried looking for representation for this MS with no success. I'm wondering if it's the query that's turning agents off or the sample chapters. If anyone would be willing to go over the first six chapters, I'd really appreciate it! Here's the query:
Lindsay doesn’t want to be a werewolf. She’s put up a front for her family and friends, kept guys at arm’s length, chained herself to the floor on the nights of the full moon, and avoided others of her kind for ten years. But now her little brother’s been kidnapped and sold overseas. Now she wishes her abilities were sharper and stronger than they are. Maybe then she wouldn’t have to trade her freedom for Wayne’s help. That might sound dramatic, but marrying this guy and moving to his secret all-werewolf settlement sure sounds like prison to Lindsay. He’s the only werewolf she knows who can help, though. She’ll do whatever he wants if it means her brother is returned home safely.
Their search leads them to Budapest. Wayne’s brooding, superior attitude, and tough outer shell start looking more like shields he hides his shy, awkward self behind. The beast Lindsay has been wrestling with all these years starts feeling less like an abomination and more like an exhilarating gift. By the time they find her brother, she's come to the conclusion that she was wrong about both of them. But being in Europe also brings Lindsay face to face with a werewolf alpha, whose mafia-boss-like reign is what got her brother sold. And if he isn’t stopped, there’s no telling what he’ll do to any other humans he finds irksome.
PM me if you're interested! I'm willing to beta read any sci-fi, fantasy, or regular YA fiction in return!
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